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A nice prelude. It started out sounding as if from the classical period until you brought in some twists of harmony. Variations in dynamics would be an idea like through bars 6 and 7 and leading up to bar 12.

I assume it's playable. It'll get you moving around the fretboard. The third beat of bar 3 would need to be played with the bottom D on VI on the 10th fret which is ok as next bar you move down a couple of frets. The one I'm not sure about is the first beat in bar 5. I'd try to play that in position VI with the lowerBb on VI fret 6, the D open but the stretch to the high D means you'll need long fingers.........Perhaps there are other ways. Perhaps others can comment?

A 4 part D major chord would have been nice at the end. (But it's your work and if you're happy with it, fine. That was just my reaction!)

Edited by Quinn
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16 hours ago, Quinn said:

A nice prelude. It started out sounding as if from the classical period until you brought in some twists of harmony. Variations in dynamics would be an idea like through bars 6 and 7 and leading up to bar 12.

I assume it's playable. It'll get you moving around the fretboard. The third beat of bar 3 would need to be played with the bottom D on VI on the 10th fret which is ok as next bar you move down a couple of frets. The one I'm not sure about is the first beat in bar 5. I'd try to play that in position VI with the lowerBb on VI fret 6, the D open but the stretch to the high D means you'll need long fingers.........Perhaps there are other ways. Perhaps others can comment?

A 4 part D major chord would have been nice at the end. (But it's your work and if you're happy with it, fine. That was just my reaction!)

 

Ty!

I think the hardest part is bar 3, I recommend to play the bass on the 10th fret from the first beat for continuity of the phrase. I don't think the stretch in bar 5 is too hard, the stretch in bar 6 is more difficult imo

This is rough playing 

https://voca.ro/1fF3bsf72rCI

Edited by Gyugcac

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