semotivo Posted January 19, 2022 Share Posted January 19, 2022 Hi all This is nothing much, just a nice small allegretto. i have temporarily lost the midi file. Maybe i then make this a real piece with notation program. I don't play piano, this more a kind of piece for machine. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu allegretto for piano simple > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted January 20, 2022 Share Posted January 20, 2022 Well first off, I think that even if you don't play an instrument you should, when composing any sort of music, try to make your music come alive and be idiomatic to the instrument. That would also help the piece feel more graceful and artful rather than robotic and stiff. Having said that I think this piece could benefit greatly from cross-faded dynamics, where the entrances of the different contrapuntal lines could be brought out and then softened when a new iteration of the line comes in. Although it'd be understandable if later on when the voices get into a more involved back and forth they basically become equally important. Also, what's with the pause at 1:41? Seems like the piece is really missing an adequate transition back to the primary material. As regarding playability - it seems to be mostly made up of 2 voices akin to a 2-voice invention, so good job there. It would be interesting to see the score if you ever do find your midi file again. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
semotivo Posted January 22, 2022 Author Share Posted January 22, 2022 thank you for your feedback. I'll think about it. It has been some time when i made this. I think i know where the midi file is. I at the moment don't have good software. If i would do something, would have to use one old computer that has windows xp where the midi orchestrator is working. Musescore is otherwise good, it is capable for good result, but it is too slow to use in the phase when i am thinking to change something. It takes time to transform midi to score with all articulation marks. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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