Willy Kuo Posted January 20, 2022 Posted January 20, 2022 >>> https://soundcloud.com/user-54415704/last-forever >>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7OFLaJ2eOQI Chorus: Let's get down together, baby you should know it better Wanna be with you, and show you how that love lasts forever Oh, here take my sweater, could you hear my little whisper I'd turn around and show your how that love lasts forever Verse1: Mmm~ you'd know what I'm going to do With you, everything is kinda feeling real Deep down inside, if I can't deny, then you'll be the one who do me right Pre-chorus: And the thing is, when I ran into you I believed it could've been more surprising It's so nice, and it's good, cuz I Knew you still feel so right, feel so high Just stay in my eyes Chorus: Let's get down together, baby you should know it better Wanna be with you, and show you how that love lasts forever Oh, here take my sweater, could you hear my little whisper I'd turn around and show your how that love lasts forever Verse1: Hey, don't you think we should get closer It's real, everything's related to us Don't try to fight, cuz I'll make you mine, then you'll be the one who do me right Pre-chorus: And the thing is, when I ran into you I believed it could've been more surprising It's so nice, and it's good, cuz I Knew you still feel so right, feel so high Just stay in my eyes Chorus: Let's get down together, baby you should know it better Wanna be with you, and show you how that love lasts forever Oh, here take my sweater, could you hear my little whisper I'd turn around and show your how that love lasts forever Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted March 29, 2022 Posted March 29, 2022 Yo So, I'm not trying to sound like a pretentious dick or anything, but I've heard a bunch of your songs and they all pretty much sound the same. Jazzy chords with percussive hits on the 2 and 4 beats about longing for love and all that. I like the style, and you've got some talent with guitar, but I'd encourage you to explore different approaches then the early John Mayer type stuff. I love your dedication and consistency in posting new material. But for me, I've always been drawn to delving into new tactics with composition. It seems like you've got the whole "yo girl I want you bad" way of playing...what else you got? Maybe try arpeggios in your chords for your next idea, or creating riffs instead of changing a few notes in extended chords with the same rhythms I've heard you do over and over again. Once more, don't mean to sound harsh, but there's a lot of different ways to present your material. Variance in rhythm is a simple way to keep the listener engaged if they're checking out your plethora of posts. Excited for more man, keep up the good work. I love hearing fellow guitarists on this site. Quote
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