PeterthePapercomPoser Posted February 7, 2022 Posted February 7, 2022 This is great! The only comment I have about it is that it seems to be in 3/4 rather than 6/8. The rhythmic identity of your motive is in duple rather than triple time. It starts on beat 3 (beat 2 in 3/4) which is an off-beat in 6/8 (and given the slurry of consecutive 16th notes doesn't sound like a pick-up but instead accents that beat). If you look at the whole rest of the sinfonia, there are many places that put an emphasis on beats that are off-beats in 6/8 but on the beat in 3/4 which contribute to this feeling. Great job though. The motive is long and has it's own characteristic identity that's memorable. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote
ComposedBySam Posted February 7, 2022 Author Posted February 7, 2022 17 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said: This is great! The only comment I have about it is that it seems to be in 3/4 rather than 6/8. The rhythmic identity of your motive is in duple rather than triple time. It starts on beat 3 (beat 2 in 3/4) which is an off-beat in 6/8 (and given the slurry of consecutive 16th notes doesn't sound like a pick-up but instead accents that beat). If you look at the whole rest of the sinfonia, there are many places that put an emphasis on beats that are off-beats in 6/8 but on the beat in 3/4 which contribute to this feeling. Great job though. The motive is long and has it's own characteristic identity that's memorable. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for your valuable feedback. Yes your right about the time here... Lol basically I myself was too lazy about contemplating about the rythm and I was like: well too many notes in one bar? Let that be 6/8. I forgot to pay attention to the accents. 1 Quote
Tom Statler Posted February 19, 2022 Posted February 19, 2022 I agree with Peter; feels like it's in 3/4. I like the harmonic shifts in bars 12 - 20. 1 Quote
ComposedBySam Posted February 28, 2022 Author Posted February 28, 2022 On 2/19/2022 at 9:59 PM, Tom Statler said: I agree with Peter; feels like it's in 3/4. I like the harmonic shifts in bars 12 - 20. Thanks for listening Quote
Jerry Engelbach Posted March 3, 2022 Posted March 3, 2022 Why did you call it a Sinfonia? It's a fugue. 1 Quote
ComposedBySam Posted March 14, 2022 Author Posted March 14, 2022 On 3/4/2022 at 1:56 AM, Jerry Engelbach said: Why did you call it a Sinfonia? It's a fugue. Basically it's not a well developed fugue with defined episodes and entries. It's light and uses mostly free counterpoint. Hence I thought considering it a 3 voiced invention (that is, 'Sinfonia') would be more apt. Thanks for listening 1 Quote
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