Draft In the Key of C

Hello everyone! This is a new piece I wrote. I hope you like it, and I'm excited to receive any feedback you may have!

Hey, pretty cool piece! I like the bounciness and energy you have, very catchy at times. 

Some things that caught my attention:

- watch your voicing, you have some gigantic chords I don't think are playable.

- the adagio section is weak to me. I'd maybe rework this section, but if you like it as is a thought would be to take out the repeat at least. 

- I like the key change, but it's overall very C heavy. Maybe have the Cm sections in Am or something, or tinker with transitions to change to a close key. Maybe keep the Cm adagio and the next section you go to Gm that eventually leads back to C. 

Make sure you get out there and comment on other composer's pieces so they hopefully will return the favor and share some thoughts with your music.

Just some initial impressions and ideas; well done!