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Extra points for the human interpretation. The melodic motive is simple and easily recognizable, and gives a sense of cohesion but perhaps there's not too much development around that idea (which isn't necessarily bad, of course)... Do you have a PDF of this? If not I'd really encourage you to write a score of this beautiful piece you made.

The section starting around 2:40 is very fine, and the end of this piece is "prepared" enough to my taste (though abrupt endings work nicely if they're properly done too)

Thank you for sharing this and enriching this already full of gems forum!!

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.

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Thank you for posting the score!  I didn't really understand the level of sophistication and variation present within this piece until I followed along with the score.  I love that you changed key at the end - it had a very bittersweet effect and changing the key or ending on a non-tonic chord is something I've been trying to do more in my own music.  I also love the variation in figuration you included within the piece while still keeping the melody familiar (meas. 74 and onward).  Thanks for sharing!

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