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Hello.  I'm new to this forum and have no idea how it works, but I've been looking at some comps and they look great.  I show you a little piece I did for piano a while ago.  Maybe I'll make an album with works of this character.

https://youtu.be/WZlpsdsHUk0 (sorry for the MIDI)

very nice

Yes it sounds classical, but good. 

1 hour ago, Luis Hernández said:

Yes it sounds classical, but good. 

 

Of course, the main idea is the work has a classical-romantic style. Thank you for the comment, Luis.

I really like this, reminds me of a Chopin piece I can't quite pinpoint. As you stated, I think it'd be a great idea to write a set of pieces that this would belong with.

Welcome to the site, btw. Be sure to check out pieces by other composers here, they'll likely return the favor and comment on yours!

7 hours ago, Thatguy v2.0 said:

I really like this, reminds me of a Chopin piece I can't quite pinpoint. As you stated, I think it'd be a great idea to write a set of pieces that this would belong with.

Welcome to the site, btw. Be sure to check out pieces by other composers here, they'll likely return the favor and comment on yours!

 

Thanks for your comment, Thatguy v2.0. I've been finding some real gems on this forum lately, and besides, I feel very welcomed by the users here. There is a very comfortable environment. I will consider your advice 😉

On 8/9/2022 at 11:58 PM, ClaudioCamacho said:

Hello.  I'm new to this forum and have no idea how it works, but I've been looking at some comps and they look great.  I show you a little piece I did for piano a while ago.  Maybe I'll make an album with works of this character.

Hi, just find this nice little piece! I love it since it is idiomatic to the piano. And the harmony is good as well! It's a few months now so maybe you have some new compositions done I guess?🤔You can post them here too!

Henry

Excellent, in a Chopin-like style!

I would suggest to use it as part of a larger composition. It sound a bit like a fragment to me. (but good!)

On 1/5/2023 at 2:34 PM, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi, just find this nice little piece! I love it since it is idiomatic to the piano. And the harmony is good as well! It's a few months now so maybe you have some new compositions done I guess?🤔You can post them here too!

Henry

 

Hello Henry. First of all thank you very much for your words. As you say, I've been composing something lately and what has motivated me to work have been the works of Scriabin, I'm discovering beautiful music, but I'm a bit stuck due to the formal structure of the work, I guess with a little effort will be done soon. One of the weak points I have is that, although I really like to compose small works like this, I can't manage to make large movements of long duration.

If I still having doubts on the work, maybe I will post here the incompleted work. Greetings ^^

3 hours ago, panta rei said:

Excellent, in a Chopin-like style!

I would suggest to use it as part of a larger composition. It sound a bit like a fragment to me. (but good!)

 

 

Thanks for the suggestion panta rei, I will try!