ElectroMusic "Out of space"

Thank for you listening.
My first work in electro music
"out of space"

👉👉👉 listening composition

Thank you for sharing.

The beat at the beginning doesn't really convince me, it breaks the kind of ambient the pad gives. No dynamics, not that I notice. I suppose that in this music the "production" part and everything related to it becomes one of the key aspects to have in mind. You may want to dig into that because while the musical ideas shown here aren't bad in my opinion, I'm sure more care in the sound would have produced a much better result with the same material. Since there are hundreds of pads available, perhaps it would be nice to try some more.

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.