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Just wrote these piano works tonight, im posting because im looking for feedback

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  • hw1234 changed the title to Piano 111 and 112
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I think both works end quite abruptly. The picardy third in Piano 111 is surprising because there is not great struggle in the c minor passages. For Piano 112, bar 14 and 23, I will change the later half of the accompaniment to G natural to ensure smooth baseline. Also the transition between sections can be smoother. But these two works can definity be extended to longer and larger works! Will you consider changing some of the accompaniments? I remember I also liked to use repeated notes and octaves as accompaniment, but later found it quite boring and not flowing enough.

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