hw1234 Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 (edited) Just wrote these piano works tonight, im posting because im looking for feedback Edited September 17, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano_112_F_Major piano_111 > next PDF piano_111Piano_112_F_Major Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted September 18, 2022 Share Posted September 18, 2022 I think both works end quite abruptly. The picardy third in Piano 111 is surprising because there is not great struggle in the c minor passages. For Piano 112, bar 14 and 23, I will change the later half of the accompaniment to G natural to ensure smooth baseline. Also the transition between sections can be smoother. But these two works can definity be extended to longer and larger works! Will you consider changing some of the accompaniments? I remember I also liked to use repeated notes and octaves as accompaniment, but later found it quite boring and not flowing enough. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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