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Ein schönes Klavierstück!

1 hour ago, Henry Ng said:

That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful!

but I agree

Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. 

That's my only criticism 

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47 minutes ago, AngelCityOutlaw said:

Ein schönes Klavierstück!

but I agree

Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. 

That's my only criticism 

 

Dankeschön! And I agree with your criticism. 

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Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments.

The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird.

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6 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments.

The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird.

 

I see, that is a valid criticism. But I also think that this problem can be solved by playing the end in ritardando as someone else here pointed out. Regardless, thanks for listening and commenting. 

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