ComposedBySam Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 Hope you like it. Contructive criticism is warmly welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted September 18, 2022 Share Posted September 18, 2022 That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposedBySam Posted September 18, 2022 Author Share Posted September 18, 2022 8 minutes ago, Henry Ng said: That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful! Thanks for listening and I appreciate your reasonable criticism 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted September 18, 2022 Share Posted September 18, 2022 Ein schönes Klavierstück! 1 hour ago, Henry Ng said: That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful! but I agree Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. That's my only criticism 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposedBySam Posted September 18, 2022 Author Share Posted September 18, 2022 47 minutes ago, AngelCityOutlaw said: Ein schönes Klavierstück! but I agree Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. That's my only criticism Dankeschön! And I agree with your criticism. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted September 19, 2022 Share Posted September 19, 2022 Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments. The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposedBySam Posted September 20, 2022 Author Share Posted September 20, 2022 6 hours ago, Luis Hernández said: Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments. The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird. I see, that is a valid criticism. But I also think that this problem can be solved by playing the end in ritardando as someone else here pointed out. Regardless, thanks for listening and commenting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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