Blaue Nacht- Ein Klavierstück

Hope you like it. Contructive criticism is warmly welcome

That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful!

  On 9/18/2022 at 3:38 AM, Henry Ng said:

That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful!

 

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Thanks for listening and I appreciate your reasonable criticism 🙂

Ein schönes Klavierstück!

  On 9/18/2022 at 3:38 AM, Henry Ng said:

That's lovely harmony! If the accompaniment has more variety then it will be more beautiful!

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but I agree

Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. 

That's my only criticism 

  On 9/18/2022 at 5:00 AM, AngelCityOutlaw said:

Ein schönes Klavierstück!

but I agree

Also, the ending is much too abrupt and would be better with a more-resolved cadence and ritardando. 

That's my only criticism 

 

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Dankeschön! And I agree with your criticism. 

Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments.

The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird.

  On 9/19/2022 at 7:08 PM, Luis Hernández said:

Nice piece. It doesn't bother that the left hand is an ostinato because this is a short piece and the right hand has variety of ornaments.

The ending, in my opinion, needs some preparation. Perhaps you have not built a proper cadence, the final chord is one of the most dissonant moments in the piece and that's why it sounds ¿incomplete? If those big dissonances had been heard before it would not be so weird.

 

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I see, that is a valid criticism. But I also think that this problem can be solved by playing the end in ritardando as someone else here pointed out. Regardless, thanks for listening and commenting.