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from my upcoming album. lyrics don’t mean anything 

I'd be interested in hearing this once properly recorded. As is, it's kinda hard to hear certain things, and the backing vocals are pretty loud.

However, I dig this so far. I like the 3 3 2 2 2 rhythmic scheme, and your exploration around a lot of the fret board. I would maybe chop off the ending section, it seemed like an unnecessary 30 seconds or so. 

Is this complete or still a work in progress? As it stands, it sounds like a segue or transition in between songs for your album, or perhaps the opening or closing song. If it's not done yet, you could easily think about traditional song forms from popular music (verse, chorus, bridge, etc.) if you wanted to expand this. 

Nicely done, keep us updated on your progress!

On 9/26/2022 at 12:27 PM, Thatguy v2.0 said:

I'd be interested in hearing this once properly recorded. As is, it's kinda hard to hear certain things, and the backing vocals are pretty loud.

 

I think the recording quality lends itself to the aesthetic I’m trying to create. I was inspired by this album in particular