Fantasia in G# minor

Constructive criticism is warmly welcome 🙂

Constructive criticism:
• Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line.
• Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot?

Opinions:
• The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure.
• I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great!

Good job!

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.
 

8 hours ago, Omicronrg9 said:

Constructive criticism:
• Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line.
• Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot?

Opinions:
• The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure.
• I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great!

Good job!

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.
 

 

 

Thanks for listening and giving such a great feedback 

I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations.  Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending).

14 hours ago, bkho said:

I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations.  Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending.

 

Yes you got that right. Thanks for listening 🙂