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Not a fan of this style but I did like the part from 1:40 to the end above everything else which sounded good to me. Hopefully someone else that is immersed in this style of music can deliver better feedback than me. Thank you for sharing BTW!!

 

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Hey man

Dig the vibes on this one. I've recently listened to a lot of this dark-trance type of music lately, even with an industrial feel, and your piece kind of sounds like that genre. Maybe it's that, maybe it's more video game soundtrack? Either way, seems like you have a good start.

Since this type of music seems to rely so much on layering, I would consider different ways of going about this. For instance, maybe have some of the layers stretch out 8 bars and be really slow...or perhaps have more variation in the types of sound samples you're choosing. I really like the guitar parts, but they feel like fills and drone notes more than actual parts. Maybe some kind of melody in the guitars would go nice over the synth? Or some more variance in the chord progression (I know a lot of that stuff is static, but I just mean choosing more than one or two chords for it to me playing).

Anyway, cool stuff! I like the style, and like I said I've grown more accustomed to this type of music recently. I would scour Youtube or any other free source that offers advice with writing music of the kind you desire; you'll find a never-ending plethora of knowledge and information vital to your growth as a composer and musician. There's lot's of ways you could continue to improve this, even if you don't consider any advice I or anyone else here gives, that could help you. Adding filters, more dynamics to your layering, etc. etc. 

Stick around my friend, I see you've posted only once (this post) so far. There are loads of talented musicians that meander here from time to time that if you share a bit of your thoughts on their music, they would be more willing to give yours a listen to. Thanks for sharing, and hope to hear more from you soon!

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