hw1234 Posted November 5, 2022 Posted November 5, 2022 (edited) 9 Edited November 5, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Violin_sonata_1_movement_1.custom_score Violin_Sonata_1_Movement_2.custom_score Violin_Sonata_1_Movement_3.custom_score > next PDF Violin_sonata_1_movement_1 (1)Violin_Sonata_1_Movement_2Violin_Sonata_1_Movement_3 Quote
aMusicComposer Posted November 5, 2022 Posted November 5, 2022 Harmonically, it's 'correct' and not a bad statement of themes. I like the idea of the violin starting on its own and then being joined by the piano. It does feel a bit like a sketch though (maybe it is?) as there's no real singable melody. The themes you have in constant quavers and semiquavers feel a bit square, you could maybe explore some syncopation to liven them up a bit. I would look to introduce a cantabile passage next to give the ear something different to latch onto. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote
hw1234 Posted November 5, 2022 Author Posted November 5, 2022 (edited) 1 hour ago, aMusicComposer said: Harmonically, it's 'correct' and not a bad statement of themes. I like the idea of the violin starting on its own and then being joined by the piano. It does feel a bit like a sketch though (maybe it is?) as there's no real singable melody. The themes you have in constant quavers and semiquavers feel a bit square, you could maybe explore some syncopation to liven them up a bit. I would look to introduce a cantabile passage next to give the ear something different to latch onto. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for the feedback, it is a very quick sketch just composed in 10 minutes ill have to fix the score. A second cantabile passage is next! Edited November 5, 2022 by hw1234 Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.