hw1234 Posted November 13, 2022 Posted November 13, 2022 (edited) Ive now been composing for 6 years but it seems my scores are not very good. I give myself a year before I start composing better scores. Edited November 13, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano_241.custom_score (1) Piano_213.custom_score (1) > next PDF Piano_241Piano_213 (1) Quote
Luis Hernández Posted November 14, 2022 Posted November 14, 2022 The first piece is quite simple. Because of the I-V harmony and the constant rhythm it's not very interesting. The second one, however, is nice. I see you try to stay safe in the counterpoint using mostly chord-tone, which is not bad, but it makes the piece sound a bit jumpy sometimes. There are many octaves that would be avoided working with two or three voices, and subsequently, there are some parallels. In all, the piece sounds very good. 1 Quote
hw1234 Posted November 14, 2022 Author Posted November 14, 2022 1 hour ago, Luis Hernández said: The first piece is quite simple. Because of the I-V harmony and the constant rhythm it's not very interesting. The second one, however, is nice. I see you try to stay safe in the counterpoint using mostly chord-tone, which is not bad, but it makes the piece sound a bit jumpy sometimes. There are many octaves that would be avoided working with two or three voices, and subsequently, there are some parallels. In all, the piece sounds very good. Thabks for the reply I agree that the first score is not very good. Glad you enjoyed the second score Quote
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