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Quite a poor score but I decided to post it anyway

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Sounds like you are trying to emulate the classical era style. I think so far you are doing a fine job. I don't have much to add at this point, but be sure that you balance your bass instruments a bit better so we can hear them. Also, will you give the violas a more interesting part? Or are they only going to be used for repeating notes?

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I am repeating myself here Hw, but please don't mind if I insist: articulations and dynamics for your symphony movement project may improve a lot the results you're getting which are decent already. 

Looking forward to see the full movement!

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.

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Don't want the review count to be -1 all the time, so I will respond!

I find this excerpt having great potential to be further developed to a full movement! The opening 8 bars are good enough, and can for sure be extended! I love the tremolos in bar 15-24! It gives me thw impression of Schubert's Unfinished, at the near end of the first movement! You should definitelt try it more! Keep going and hope to see you present longet and more developed work!

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