Piano score 284

Here is my most recent score in c major

Piano score 285

1 hour ago, hw1234 said:

Here is my most recent score in c major

For piano 284: I feel like it's more in F major! The beginning C major acts more like the dominant preparation of F major. That's why I find the B natural in b.18 somewhat strange. But it's definitely a great beginning to be developed! It's light-hearted and classical for me.

For piano 285: There are many tone clushes and false relation in this one. Is that your intended sound? I find bar 11-13 really dissonant, but the dissonance can create a humorous effect if used repeatedly!

Henry

284 I agree it is in F maj. It has some catchy sound.

285The super-tonal (with no extensions) background of this piece makes it difficult to assume what happens in measure 13.

I can buy measure 3 thinking it's an Am9 chord. But in m. 13 theres no sense the melody with the chord, nor the resolution of eh C#.