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Here is my most recent score in c major

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1 hour ago, hw1234 said:

Here is my most recent score in c major

For piano 284: I feel like it's more in F major! The beginning C major acts more like the dominant preparation of F major. That's why I find the B natural in b.18 somewhat strange. But it's definitely a great beginning to be developed! It's light-hearted and classical for me.

For piano 285: There are many tone clushes and false relation in this one. Is that your intended sound? I find bar 11-13 really dissonant, but the dissonance can create a humorous effect if used repeatedly!

Henry

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