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This composition mostly relies on the same waltz/melody, it is introduced strait away and continuous throughout the piece. I've spent about 4-5 hours completing this Waltz however I feel like I could have challenged myself a bit more like with my previous Waltz, Waltz No.4 in D Major.

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Edited by Tom Dahlenburg
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Hi @Tom Dahlenburg,

Finally you have a new post here! I enjoy the joy in your waltz, and actually that's not easy to achieve! Overall I find it very graceful.

I like the pizz. section near the end and the contrasting section in 2:21. Personally I would like to add more contrasting material in it, since the theme is mostly played in high register in D major. I think modulation to related keys, playing the theme in low legister, add a contrasting theme will do, since the main theme itself is enjoyable! This is subjective though.

Thanks for sharing! I see you have other pieces in youtube. Do we have the chance to see them posted here?

Henry

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