SATB Aanlysis

How did I do? On accuracy?

I really like the chromatic pulling of that F# in th melody. 

Hey @GospelPiano12,

I think the transcription is correct besides some improvisatory freedom on the rhythm.

1 hour ago, GospelPiano12 said:

I really like the chromatic pulling of that F# in th melody. 

Yup that F# makes it more jazzy and spiritual like and I like that too.

Henry

9 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hey @GospelPiano12,

I think the transcription is correct besides some improvisatory freedom on the rhythm.

Yup that F# makes it more jazzy and spiritual like and I like that too.

Henry

 

Where are the improvisatory rhythms? How should do I fix them?

I think I'll leave the F# and then have the I chord on beats 1-2 and have the V7/vi on beats 3-4

Is my rhythm accurate?

Hey @GospelPiano12,

Nice playing! I think the rhythm is accurate! However there are some pitches that appear to be wrong for me:

B.2 "in the " should be G-A, b.3 "Name of" should be G and F.

B.4 "Je" should be F, b.5 "sus" should be E

B.10 "other_ should be G-A, b.11 "name" should be G

B.14 "Call on his" should be A-G-A, b.15 "name" should be Bb.

Henry

Thank you, I'll make those adjustments...aural skills really left me 10x more confident with rhythmic notation...

Here are the verses, I've already wrote 4-parts, and I incorporated some suspensions and things