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The opening sentence has good presentation and continuation, and the modulation to C major reasonable, but the 7 bar structure puts me off a little bit!

The triplets provide good contrast but quite unrelatef to the previous bars. The ending on F major is too sudden without enough preparation. You should modulate to it with more preparation!

Henry

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