Short WIP Sinfonia

Hello just started to compose this sinfonia looking for feedback thanks

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I will assume that you want to make a usual classical symphony and hence it'll have various movements. I will also assume that this is the first one. My suggestion:

You want to develop. I would start by doing this: 
Then you add material that you think that could fit there and then after a while you make some epic transition to the material you have right here (amplified a little if you want), and then optionally write a coda.

Hope this serves you of something.

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.

Hi @hw1234,

I agree with Daniel. Here only a sentence is presented. My feedback is always to extend your materials and passages! The first 4 bars are only accompaninent and you fo have interesting material with thst f minor chord in b.9. Pair it up with sf and use it more!

Henry