Where to Begin

Here's a pop tune I composed using the Sonar 8.5 piano roll (that's how I make all my stuff).

It's inspired by the 1970's era of pop songs.

I have 2 different endings which I'd like others opinion on as to which is better.

I've posted both versions here; "where to begin" and "where to begin-v2".

I'm leaning toward the "where to begin" ending (albeit maybe a bit over-the-top) as opposed to the other one which seems kind of boring.

What do you think?

Just type a 1 for "where to begin" or a 2 for "where to begin-v2".

And of course any comments you might have too.

Enjoy.

-Rick

Hi @epii,

11 hours ago, epii said:

What do you think?

Just type a 1 for "where to begin" or a 2 for "where to begin-v2".

Haha I think the difference between the two endings are not really big! 1 will be more quietly ended and 2 more excited but both are good endings for me!

Again this is a very enjoyable listening and thanks for sharing!

Henry

Henry,

Thanks for your input.

I think I'm liking the more "excited" ending better now. I keep going back and forth.

I don't particularly like either of them. Maybe I should just re-work the ending from scratch.

Listening to myself talking about my music that nobody will ever even hear makes me feel like a self centered idiot.

I guess I am.  🙂

Thanks again.

-Rick

8 minutes ago, epii said:

Listening to myself talking about my music that nobody will ever even hear makes me feel like a self centered idiot.

Haha who isn't a self-centered one (though absolutely not an idiot) considering composing? If I am not self-centered I won't even compose to express myself through creating music! Also who doesn't like others to listen to their own music and share own thoughts on them? I am certainly not an exception for that! This is for sure a legitimate thought.

Henry