Gabriel Carlisle Posted April 28, 2023 Posted April 28, 2023 (edited) I would love any feedback as I am rather still a beginner in the music field. Check out my other compositions on my Soundcloud https://on.soundcloud.com/CBqfm Edited June 14, 2023 by Zeldz MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 04 Temple of Varýtita (Day Exterior [Gravity On]) > next 1 Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted April 28, 2023 Posted April 28, 2023 Hello @Zeldz, Welcome to the forum! For me the material is quite beautiful! I like the xylophone-like sound! It's just that the repetition is quite too much and I feel like you can at least cut it half or add more varieties in it like adding contrasting sections or voice exchange. But as this is a game soundtrack maybe just keep it in 4 minutes will be good enough! Thanks for sharing and joining! Henry Quote
Gabriel Carlisle Posted April 28, 2023 Author Posted April 28, 2023 Thank you! I definitely agree with you on the repetition. I often times do that and its a bad habit. The song itself is actually around 3:50 however i looped it twice with a fade at the end. I will definitely make it less repetitive. Again thank you! 1 Quote
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