Bagatelle 4

Hi this is a improvised score by me enjoy!

Hi @hw1234,

For me this could be a good start for an A section of a ternary form. In b.7 third beat you can probably add a C major chord in LH to make the cadential formula stronger. Actually I like how you use the G# in b.11 to have G natural in b.12 to reach C major. You should extend the C major section longer to make the modulation more reasonable! Then you can start in C major for the B section if you want.

Thanks for sharing!

Henry