HtWinsor Posted May 11, 2023 Posted May 11, 2023 (edited) Hi this is my second waltz written in C minor enjoy!n HW1234 Edited May 11, 2023 by HtWinsor MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu waltz_2 > next PDF waltz_2 Quote
malumCompositor Posted May 11, 2023 Posted May 11, 2023 To be honest, it doesn't feel very Waltz-like, especially with the dotted rhythms in the second bar, and the left hand from 9 onwards. However, the theme sounds quite nice. 1 Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted May 11, 2023 Posted May 11, 2023 Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor, I agree with @malumCompositor that from bar 9 onward it's not waltz like. For me it becomes a march! Also it's fine to modulate to c minor, but to end in it without a proper perfect cadence makes the C minor ending unreasonable! Make sure to add a V-i cadence if you want to establish it as the tonic key! Henry Quote
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