My 4th Complete 3 Movement Piano Sonata

Hi here is my newest and favorite piano sonata I. have composed. Enjoy!

Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor ,

I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov.

For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!)

For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord.

Thanks for sharing!

Henry

19 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor ,

I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov.

For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!)

For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord.

Thanks for sharing!

Henry

 

I'll work o your suggestions! Thanks!