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Hi here my 8th bagatelle it is in the key of F Major! Enjoy!

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for bars 11 and 15, do you want the second half of those bars to follow the next bar similarly i.e. left hand off beat strumming? I think that would keep the piece's momentum going.
The harmonics to me does sound a bit strange for this classical style, but let's see what others think.

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Although it sounds like an early classical style, it has some elements that are out of place. For example those thick chords under a thin melody line.
It sounds good but the harmony is basic and could do with some surprising harmonic moments.

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I hope you don't mind but I took a closer look at the beginning of your piece, which I really like btw, and I jotted down an alternative that's perhaps more in style. I then improvised a little at the end to round it off. I play at a slower speed than you intended for your piece but it would work at either pace.

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