Bagatelle 21

I enjoyed composing this score today hope you enjoy,!

Hi @HtWinsor,

I am not happy with this one as you seem to walk back track. I like in your previous posts you are starting to develop your material, but here they are all lost. For me they are just fortuitously combined together. Do you write this in 5 minutes or so? I really hope you can create much more developed music since you definitely have the materials and ideas to do so! But with an 11-bar "work" cannot even be called a work in this context! Most likely they are sketches!

Another thing is the triple octaves in b.10 & 11 LH is unplayable!

Henry

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12 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi @HtWinsor,

I am not happy with this one as you seem to walk back track. I like in your previous posts you are starting to develop your material, but here they are all lost. For me they are just fortuitously combined together. Do you write this in 5 minutes or so? I really hope you can create much more developed music since you definitely have the materials and ideas to do so! But with an 11-bar "work" cannot even be called a work in this context! Most likely they are sketches!

Another thing is the triple octaves in b.10 & 11 LH is unplayable!

Henry

 

Sorry to disapoint I changed the tempo and added more material hoping this improved the score!

Hi @HtWinsor,

4 hours ago, HtWinsor said:

Sorry to disapoint I changed the tempo and added more material hoping this improved the score!

I appreciate your adding those details as this make the music sounds more concrete. But I do disappoint given that how many new ideas you create yet wasted. You have many great ideas but you don't fully realize their potential and develop them. I feel quite bad both for your material and you since the music materials have the potential to be greater pieces, and you have the ability to craft them to better pieces! But now they are left in their sketched form, never realized. You really should concentrate on one or two ideas and extend them in many hours of time, rather than having many undeveloped by composing several minutes! That's what I felt sometimes and maybe they are personal though.

Henry