Bagatelle 41

Hi here is a score I composed in A Minor hope you enjoy! Don't forget to leave feedback.

Hi @HtWinsor,

4 hours ago, HtWinsor said:

Don't forget to leave feedback.

Of course it's not a problem to leave feedback, but make sure you really listen to our feedback and post works here with some quality instead of bombarding the forum with undeveloped "pieces"! For me you appear to need our advice and help, but when we provide them to you you just simply ignore them and post sketches here sometimes. I'm real sad about this, first you have so many good ideas but seldom developed, and second your posts may hinder others who really need our advice! I really want you to consider this before posting.

This piece I do think you are trying to develop your ideas! You do try it by pairing them up like those galant sonatas. That's what I like about. 

For the harmony, I think the Eb in b.20 strange since it's never reslove to D before going to F major. What about changing b.29 to a V7/IV to IV before getting to V and I?

I like your voice exchange in b.57! But the ending in A minor is unprepared for me even though you have a cadence for it since it's not forecast. You should have more minor passages before entering the A minor in my opinion.

Henry