Bagatelle 46

This is my 46th bagatelle! Do you think I should extend the score or not?

Hi @HtWinsor,

From your score it's in a ternary structure. For me the middle sections need to be extended. You have, agiain, many unnecessary perfect cadences for me like those in b.15-16 & 34-35. I like how you reach B major in b.23 by using C# minor as the pivotal chord (does that come from my suggestion on your previous post of the concerto?), but I think you should stay there much longer and start a new theme there. Also since this piece is in Baroque style for me, you can add more sequences to extend the pasages!

Henry