Night Draft

Something I made a while ago and finished today.

Hi @bored_comedy,

This is real struggling music. There are many augmented chords and major 7th in it which is not resolved at all in the whole piece. 

The chord in b.6 & 27 RH is unplayable without spreading it. Also the last sentence is literally the same as the opening (ofc the meaning is different), so the scoring should be the same too. The tied notes are not too clean for me.

Thanks for sharing.

Henry

On 6/12/2023 at 4:39 AM, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi @bored_comedy,

This is real struggling music. There are many augmented chords and major 7th in it which is not resolved at all in the whole piece. 

The chord in b.6 & 27 RH is unplayable without spreading it. Also the last sentence is literally the same as the opening (ofc the meaning is different), so the scoring should be the same too. The tied notes are not too clean for me.

Thanks for sharing.

Henry

 

Hi @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu,

Thank you for your constructive feedback. I have fixed the anomalies that were found in the previous score. Any recommendations you have for composers who've composed in a similar style? I've been interested in adding more tension to the pieces I work on, and I'm not satisfied with how some of the tension in my score develops unexpectedly and rapidly.

Thanks,

BC