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Hi @olivercomposer,

This is a lovely piece in simple ternary. It does remind me of Richard Clayderman's piano pieces. I love the C dorian opening! The aura there is really starry with that #^6 and making it brighter. The transition to 0:54 can be longer though for me. The middle section I feel like a pop melody repeating in different keys, and I think it's fine for this style, but maybe without the varying orchestral colour you can develop your materials here more! The music goes back at 1:45 and I think the retransition is better prepared here! I love that flat subdominant chord of G invading the territory. The ending is quite beautiful with the plagal cadence on G!

Thanks for sharing!

Henry

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Hi Oliver,

You have some lovely modulations in this piano piece again!

If I were to give any criticism, it's that some of your tempo changes don't quite feel natural to me. I think it might be more expressive if the accelerando transitions were a bit more subtle. Occasionally it feels rushed, and you could draw more emotional impact from the music by slowing it down a touch.

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