HtWinsor Posted June 19, 2023 Share Posted June 19, 2023 (edited) Short Waltz's in G Major and A Minor! hope you enjoy and don't be shy with critique. Edited June 19, 2023 by HtWinsor MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu waltz_17.custom_score Waltz_18.custom_score > next PDF waltz_17Waltz_18 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 20, 2023 Share Posted June 20, 2023 Hi @HtWinsor, Waltz 17: I think you can include a half cadence in b.4. The hemiola in b.9 is interesting but the harmonic progression is strange. You can just change b.9 to a G minor chord and b.10 a C minor one before resolving to the dominant. The ending again should include half cadences. Waltz 18: B,12 and 23 the C bass since strange to me. Having the second inversion with E bass will be better. Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 20, 2023 Share Posted June 20, 2023 Waltz 17, indeed, includes a very strange modulation between measures 9 and 10. It is not very functional, something like G-F#mb5-Bb/F..... C/E. I understand that the intention is to make a descent of the bass by joint degrees but particularly that Bb/F doesn't work. I would replace it with a dominant over the following C/E as G/F, or being more dramatic, Fdim7. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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