Tragedy at the foundry

Something I am working. It’s supposed to depict a murder at the foundry and unraveling the mystery. Lemme know what you think, any suggestions on musicality or dynamics is welcomed.

thanks in advance

Hi @Hc123

It was a really enjoyable piece, It has a perfect balance of lyricism and rythm, unfortunately, the soundfonts take away some of the beauty. 

I think that if you gave us more context we will be able to help you further! If it is depicting the inquiry, I think that a jazzier mood will be great (it's a bit cliché, I know hahah)

I was actually thinking the same exact thing with implementing jazzier feel. Thanks so much for the response. And yeah the sound font irritates me so much.