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Hello @Tom Dahlenburg,

On 8/8/2023 at 3:50 PM, Tom Dahlenburg said:

This composition is a mysterious yet intriguing piece.

I do think the opening mysterious! Nice change to octatonic C minor in 0:15 which is mysterious too!

For me I feel like the style varies too much during small time span. For example in 0:50 the music suddenly turns to triumphant D major fanfare and suddenly it disappears and returns to the mysterious opening. In 1:50 there's contemplative feeling and suddenly there's intriguing struggle between A major and Eb minor right after it. Many of these passages are beautiful in their own right, but maybe each of them can be developed more and cohered with better transitions!

Thx for sharing!

Henry

 

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