Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted August 14, 2023 Posted August 14, 2023 Hello @MTK, Welcome to the forum! Maybe this is a competition related piece? But including an mp3 will help us comment on this piece much more easily with the sound! Just from the score you are using many added sevenths in the opening section. In section A you are using a double fugal like technique but it's short, and with the parallel 3rdsand 6ths it fit the echoing effect of "singing" in the lyrics, and after this section B returns to the opening.The section C "And I can sing" part is somewhat less convincing to me with the less flowing rhythm and tone clashes. I think maintaining the echoing effect in section A will be more beautiful. Thx for sharing! Henry Quote
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