A Thought ...

Hi all ...

Here's a new piano work.  All comments welcome as always.

Mark

I quite like the rhythmic ostinato in the background that serves as an arc for the development of the right hand.
It seems to me a very lyrical piece.

Hi Mark @MJFOBOE,

I quite enjoy those ostinatos and your harmonies as usal. Just beware of the ninths and tenths since it can be unplayable by pianists with small hands, so maybe arpeggios with a parenthesis can be added there. I can play those chords though.

Henry

Henry ... Thanks for reminding me ... 🙂

Heya!

Really like the texture and harmony here. This really gives me this gloomy and somewhat nostalgic feeling? Reminds me of the OST of an RPG called "One Shot" that I admire. As the others has pointed out, I love that you switched the ostinato to the right hand in the middle part, gives the left hand a spotlight for development material.

Anyways, nice piece!

Nice job!  Throughout the piece I was under the impression that most of the time the accidentals would have been better displayed as sharps with perhaps the exception of bar 21 - the Eb should definitely be spelled as a flat.  But everywhere else from what I can tell - it would be more logical for the chromatics to be spelled as sharps imo.  This is quite a dreary atmosphere you paint - does it have anything to do with autumn?  Thanks for sharing.