Reverie(?)

new piano piece, also with the score for once- pretty bad performance, if someone wants to play this feel free. also let me know if any images come to mind when you hear this, I titled it reverie just cause I needed a title, but I didn't actually have anything in mind when writing this. enjoy ^_^

I think it is a very valuable piece.
But I think it has a lot of parts of very different texture where there is no transition.
I was talking about this recently, and why I think it's important.
For example, at the beginning, it's already noticeable. The transition to measure 23 has a very big change of texture, apart from the fact that the accompaniment becomes arpeggiated, and it's sudden.
The change to measure 31 is also quite shocking because of the chromaticism and density.
I don't know, many times we think that these abrupt changes make contrasts and so on. And it can be, but they can also be perceived as something "not right", even if each element or section is very good.

 

Hi @jejrekmek,

I enjoy this piece very much and your playing is for sure not bad at all! (other than b.85 ) This is for sure a very beautiful piece!

I kind of agree with Luis's observation here. The transitions he mentioned and the transition to b.56 sounds abrupt to me too, but it grows smoother in the latter half of the piece, like the one in b.101 works well for me with more reasonable mood change there. I always think the transition is the hardest part to compose in order to make the piece smooth and reasonable, and it can ruin a piece when the transition is not good. Luckily this is certainly not the case here!

Thx for sharing!

Henry