olivercomposer Posted September 18, 2023 Share Posted September 18, 2023 (edited) Hello Again, I composed a cinematic, epic piece of music. I'm really curious about your opinion, because I think this is a really good one. What do you think? I appreciate your comment! Thank you! Edited September 18, 2023 by olivercomposer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted September 20, 2023 Share Posted September 20, 2023 Very nice use of wordbuilder! Very epic music indeed! You fluently switch between triplets and 16th notes which is a very cool way to bring constant rhythmic variety to the piece. I like the constant 3D undulation of the dragon in the video but I couldn't help but notice its uncharacteristically muscular arm with a hand that has 6 fingers! LoL Was this image AI-generated? I think it looks pretty good either way and I personally have nothing against using AI. I like the modulation at 1:01 with a short respite from the choir. And again around 2:16 - this time with choir. If I had to find something to nit pick in this piece is the stereotypical use of the choir and organ to evoke that epic vibe. Also - you seem to use the high choir in almost the same range throughout the composition. But that doesn't keep me from enjoying the music the way it is and it works fine. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olivercomposer Posted September 20, 2023 Author Share Posted September 20, 2023 5 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said: Very nice use of wordbuilder! Very epic music indeed! You fluently switch between triplets and 16th notes which is a very cool way to bring constant rhythmic variety to the piece. I like the constant 3D undulation of the dragon in the video but I couldn't help but notice its uncharacteristically muscular arm with a hand that has 6 fingers! LoL Was this image AI-generated? I think it looks pretty good either way and I personally have nothing against using AI. I like the modulation at 1:01 with a short respite from the choir. And again around 2:16 - this time with choir. If I had to find something to nit pick in this piece is the stereotypical use of the choir and organ to evoke that epic vibe. Also - you seem to use the high choir in almost the same range throughout the composition. But that doesn't keep me from enjoying the music the way it is and it works fine. Thanks for sharing! Thank you for your comment, Peter! Yes, this is an AI-generated image, and it's a little bit weird. This is the reason why I chose it, it can grab the attention. 😄 I don't know whether you noticed or not, but this "dragon" has a wing on his right side, but there's no wing on the left. (From the perspective of the monster.) 😄 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted September 20, 2023 Share Posted September 20, 2023 Hi @olivercomposer, Like Peter I especially enjoy the modulation, since it's modulated to C# minor!!! I love that the voice is not singing Ah this time but lyrics which I can't decipher. This will for sure make a great track for exciting dragon fighting scene. I feel like the brass is introduced with more care this time rather than abruptly bursting out in your previous works. This is a good work in cinematic style. Thx for sharing! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olivercomposer Posted September 20, 2023 Author Share Posted September 20, 2023 2 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hi @olivercomposer, Like Peter I especially enjoy the modulation, since it's modulated to C# minor!!! I love that the voice is not singing Ah this time but lyrics which I can't decipher. This will for sure make a great track for exciting dragon fighting scene. I feel like the brass is introduced with more care this time rather than abruptly bursting out in your previous works. This is a good work in cinematic style. Thx for sharing! Henry Thank you Henry! I always appreciate your thoughts! 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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