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Hello Again,
I composed a cinematic, epic piece of music. I'm really curious about your opinion, because I think this is a really good one.
What do you think? I appreciate your comment! Thank you!

 

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Very nice use of wordbuilder!  Very epic music indeed!  You fluently switch between triplets and 16th notes which is a very cool way to bring constant rhythmic variety to the piece.  I like the constant 3D undulation of the dragon in the video but I couldn't help but notice its uncharacteristically muscular arm with a hand that has 6 fingers!  LoL  Was this image AI-generated?  I think it looks pretty good either way and I personally have nothing against using AI.  I like the modulation at 1:01 with a short respite from the choir.  And again around 2:16 - this time with choir.  If I had to find something to nit pick in this piece is the stereotypical use of the choir and organ to evoke that epic vibe.  Also - you seem to use the high choir in almost the same range throughout the composition.  But that doesn't keep me from enjoying the music the way it is and it works fine.  Thanks for sharing!

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5 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Very nice use of wordbuilder!  Very epic music indeed!  You fluently switch between triplets and 16th notes which is a very cool way to bring constant rhythmic variety to the piece.  I like the constant 3D undulation of the dragon in the video but I couldn't help but notice its uncharacteristically muscular arm with a hand that has 6 fingers!  LoL  Was this image AI-generated?  I think it looks pretty good either way and I personally have nothing against using AI.  I like the modulation at 1:01 with a short respite from the choir.  And again around 2:16 - this time with choir.  If I had to find something to nit pick in this piece is the stereotypical use of the choir and organ to evoke that epic vibe.  Also - you seem to use the high choir in almost the same range throughout the composition.  But that doesn't keep me from enjoying the music the way it is and it works fine.  Thanks for sharing!

 

Thank you for your comment, Peter! Yes, this is an AI-generated image, and it's a little bit weird. This is the reason why I chose it, it can grab the attention. 😄 I don't know whether you noticed or not, but this "dragon" has a wing on his right side, but there's no wing on the left. (From the perspective of the monster.) 😄

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Hi @olivercomposer,

Like Peter I especially enjoy the modulation, since it's modulated to C# minor!!! I love that the voice is not singing Ah this time but lyrics which I can't decipher. This will for sure make a great track for exciting dragon fighting scene. I feel like the brass is introduced with more care this time rather than abruptly bursting out in your previous works. This is a good work in cinematic style. Thx for sharing!

Henry

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2 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi @olivercomposer,

Like Peter I especially enjoy the modulation, since it's modulated to C# minor!!! I love that the voice is not singing Ah this time but lyrics which I can't decipher. This will for sure make a great track for exciting dragon fighting scene. I feel like the brass is introduced with more care this time rather than abruptly bursting out in your previous works. This is a good work in cinematic style. Thx for sharing!

Henry

 

Thank you Henry! I always appreciate your thoughts! 🙂

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