Plasmatic Posted November 3, 2023 Posted November 3, 2023 This piece is work in progress. It is entitled Black Swan, and its made to represent a lonliness and solitude that turns into hope and determination. Please give feedback! Thanks Note: The file duration may be incorrect MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Black Swan > next 1 Quote
Awsumerguy Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 (edited) Some fun orchestration choices here: there's a good variety of dark orchestral colours (tubular bells, that weird sound around 1:32 whose origins I can't ascertain (maybe strings playing col legno?)) in play here, so it's obvious you've been doing this for a while; the supple tutti around the 2:55 mark, supplanted by a good selection of percussion instruments, caught me pleasantly off guard; and the reasonably timed harmonies throughout the piece really keep things tight and interesting throughout. The only fault I could find here without nitpicking every little detail in your melody or instrumentation (which I can't do, because there's no score) would probably be your lack of structural development, but that probably wasn't on your mind when you wrote the piece so it's fine (i.e. I would've loved to hear it go on this way for longer! 😉). You achieved a great sound nonetheless, and you should be proud having written this piece. Looking forward to more! 💪 Edited November 5, 2023 by Awsumerguy Quote
Luis Hernández Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 I really liked this pizza. Although the sounds are not quite perfect enough to denote the potential of the work, it sounds very good. And I think it conveys that feeling. Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.