The score I'm attaching will be part of a set of fifteen tracks that I sort of imagine as a story. I am happy with this one (Track 14) at certain places, but I think it isn't very "smooth" and doesn't sound proper at other places so I wanted to get the opinion of others in terms of what does not sound good, or sounds odd, or any constructive criticism at all.  Thank you in advance! Edit: Since I do not play the violin, I'd like to know if the parts I've written are playable.