I composed this little piece and would appreciate some feedback and tips

https://on.soundcloud.com/jNNbaw65ar5FNb1C7

It’s not finished yet, but I would appreciate some feedback 🙂 

I think it sounds very nice! The start reminds me of Erik Satie's Gnossiennes. I particularly like the muted sound, gives a very nice effect. 

Hello @miloclementt,

Welcome to the forum!

I enjoy the contemplative and little sad music of in F minor! I think you can change the E naturals to E flats to make the music even more contemplative! I love the patterns you are using throughout the piece since it makes it real flowing and cool. Thx for sharing your music and joining!

Henry

tranquil, tempered, with occasional rises and a low-key dash of mystery

Also reminded me of Erik Satie's Gnossiennes' ornament motif. 

Thanks a lot everyone. Appreciate it a lot🙂