gave up on this piece but wanna hear some thoughts if possible!

I made this and couldn't think of a good melody for it so i gave up lol.

The chord progressions are fun, and it definitely starts out promising. If you are having trouble filling in a melody to this progression, you might want to try coming up with the melody first. I find that it's much easier to "harmonize" an already existing melody, than it is to fit a melody to a specific chord progression.

This is an awesome progression.  I can see why you're having trouble filling in melodic lines here because especially the tail end of it gets very chromatic.  I hear i bVI iv #vi, I bVI #vi #iv bII all while a tonic pedal is playing.  @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu does that sound right?  You could also easily modulate to another key with this.  Thanks for sharing!