Gabriel Carlisle Posted March 17 Posted March 17 Good job! This is pretty good for your first Minuet. The only two things i'd say is 1. the main motif with the trill is a tad bit over used in my opinion. creating separate variations or perhaps creating another rhythm instead of the same 8th to 2 16th notes and 2. is that i feel again the rhythm of the left hand is always the same: half and quarter. Maybe add something like some 8ths? Look at Minuet in G and look at the left hand. It's still relatively simple but always making something new causing the listener to wonder whats coming next. Have a good day! I actually saw this on reddit earlier today haha. Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted March 22 Posted March 22 Hey there, nice music! Your music flows really well, and I think that's thanks to your clear and concise phrasing. This was a great exploration with two voices. Moving forward, continue to keep a keen eye on the intervals your voices create. Many times, it was an octave, 4th, or 5th. It's a cool sound, but my ears wanted to hear a nice 3rd or 6th after a while. Well done 🙂 Quote
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