Jackie Posted May 16 Posted May 16 (edited) This post was recognized by PeterthePapercomPoser! "What a wonderful and impassioned performance! Congratulations! 🎉🎉🎉" Jackie was awarded the badge 'Star Performer' and 5 points. Hi, this is my first advanced piano solo composition . Would love some feedback. Thank you.  Edited May 16 by Jackie 4 Quote
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted May 17 Posted May 17 Hello @Jackie and welcome to the forum! The accompaniment figurations in this sometimes remind me of Chopin's Revolutionary Etude (the retransitition at 1:58 especially). I personally enjoyed the waltz like middle section the most - your harmony is very romantic and builds tension and emotion beautifully. The long leading melodic line is also very passionate. It only lets up into a little sweetness in the middle section which I really love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece! Great performance as well! 1 Quote
Jackie Posted May 17 Author Posted May 17 Thank you so much, Peter. Yes, I wrote it as a preparatory Etude for the Revolutiinary. 1 Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted May 17 Posted May 17 Hi @Jackie, Welcome to the forum! Very nice playing! The piece looks not too easy to play with! Even though the piece is quite similar to Chopin’s Revolutionary Etude, I quite like the energy in it. Thx for sharing and thx for joining! Henry 1 Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted May 18 Posted May 18 You are a phenomenal pianist. You're one of those players that could move me playing Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. We'd love to see a score if you use notation software! If not, no biggie, your performance is incredible. You seem like you have a lot to offer our community, so I'm eager to hear your advice to the piano compositions submitted here. Welcome, and thanks for sharing! 1 Quote
panta rei Posted May 19 Posted May 19 Very nice piece and very well played! I agree that it can be suitable as a preparatory exercise for the revolutionary etude of Chopin. Â But your composition stands alone as a wonderful, very coherent piece of music. Congratulations! Â I would be glad if you could also add the score. 1 Quote
mazeth Posted May 20 Posted May 20 A lot of energy, really a nice piece, and well executed, congrats and thanks for sharing! 1 Quote
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