I am 16 and I made 3 Symphonys, this is my 4th Symphony Movement No.1

Hello, I am 16 and I just made 3 symphonies I need some feedback on the 4th symphony that I making, this is my first movement and I want to know what you thinking about it.

This is the worst rendering I've ever heard. There's so much tearing and cranked to a zillion distortion that I thought you blew my headphones out.

Luckily it was only my ears...

Please do yourself a favor and study up on clipping and balancing your tracks. 

As for the music, it seems like you're exploring orchestration. Nice! I'd practice smaller ensembles in the future to better layer your instruments; right now, it has just a wall of sound texture to it. Read up on brass instruments. Can they sustain those notes that long? 

Do you play an instrument? If so, I'd practice writing for that! 

Welcome to the forums 🙂 

Yeah I play Piano for about 2 years

Hi!

Please re-record and upload this piece, it is not a pleasant recording to listen to, due to the tearing, as Vince has mentioned. Putting aside the recording for a moment though, the music sounds like it would be really fun to listen to. Love your key changes towards the second half of the piece!

5 minutes ago, chopin said:

Hi!

Please re-record and upload this piece, it is not a pleasant recording to listen to, due to the tearing, as Vince has mentioned. Putting aside the recording for a moment though, the music sounds like it would be really fun to listen to. Love your key changes towards the second half of the piece!

 

Thank you, this is the best render I can do, this file that attached

Yess!! So much better, thank you for the reupload. In fact, please do us a favor and replace your mp3 in your original post with this new recording.

My comments will be the same, fun to listen to, and love your key changes. This is very "chant-like" and some people may not like this type of harmony. I don't mind it at all though, especially if this is the mood you are looking to portray.

I replaced the original posts mp3, but about the music, Mahler's symphonies were my inspiration for this symphony, as I said I made already 3 symphonies and If I say, I love my second symphony, particularly my 2nd movement, and yeah may some people don't like these harmonies.