Gwendolyn Przyjazna Posted May 29 Share Posted May 29 (edited) I wanted to share a recent project for school; I wasn't quite sure which forum this belonged in. It sounds best on headphones. I would love any feedback; this was made entirely with Cubase virtual instruments so the rhythm guitar might be slightly annoying. That said, I would love to make a proper recording of this piece in the future. Edited May 29 by Gwendolyn Przyjazna 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted May 31 Share Posted May 31 Hello @Gwendolyn Przyjazna! I think you picked the perfect title for this instrumental. It sounds to me like you could substitute electric piano for the rhythm guitar - and right now, the way it is rendered, it sounds more idiomatic to what a piano is capable of playing rather than a guitar imo. I think the guitar melody is especially evocative of solitude. It also uses a good blend of unity and variety - repeating certain phrases and elaborating on others in an unexpected and musically interesting way. The almost-aimless nature of the harmonic progression sometimes makes me think of someone in the throes of a heatstroke, which is very appropriate for a piece about summer! LoL I think It ends very nicely too - making a piece like this sound like its concluded can be difficult - it sounds like it just wants to go on and repeat itself forever. What was the assignment/prompt that this was written for? It is very interesting music and with a unique melodic sensibility that seems very individual and personal to you. Great job and thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwendolyn Przyjazna Posted May 31 Author Share Posted May 31 Hello Peter! Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I will consider recording the rhythm part on electric piano. I tried it out really quickly in Cubase. I came up with every chord at the guitar but my skill level is elementary and I agree that an electric piano might be an improvement -- especially a softer timbre. I'm glad this tune evoked a clear atmosphere for you; while writing it my mind went to taking walks around my California neighborhood in the morning with the sun being very strong. It kinds of melts any thoughts away and maybe that's why if the music sounds circular. I'm happy if the conclusion sounds solid; I struggle with endings in general lately. :S The assignment was: "Compose a short piece of about 32 bars in length in AABA song form that modulates to a distantly related key and then returns to the original key." Other than that it was really open-ended. 🙂 Thank you for listening! ☀️ ~ Gwendolyn 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aled Edwards Posted June 14 Share Posted June 14 Sounds good! Very relaxing and it does remind me of summer. Maybe a pad synth sound in the background? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwendolyn Przyjazna Posted June 24 Author Share Posted June 24 (edited) New version with synth ("Wave Turn Around" from HALion Sonic): https://soundcloud.com/gwendolyn_przyjazna/the-solitude-of-summer-alternate-version Edited June 24 by Gwendolyn Przyjazna 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwendolyn Przyjazna Posted June 24 Author Share Posted June 24 On 6/14/2024 at 5:08 AM, Aled Edwards said: Sounds good! Very relaxing and it does remind me of summer. Maybe a pad synth sound in the background? Hello! Thank you for the kind words, and sorry for the delay -- I just finished the Spring semester of school today. I just posted an alternate version of this piece on my SoundCloud with a synth pad I thought was interesting. It's a bit "thicker". I would love to hear any thoughts if you feel moved to listen. https://soundcloud.com/gwendolyn_przyjazna/the-solitude-of-summer-alternate-version Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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