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Hello @Cappielly!

Nice song!  Very folksy and country-like!  I like the sarcasm of the lyrics - I can imagine some bitter old man singing this and playing his fiddle.  Formally, this doesn't really have a chorus - just instrumental interludes that cling to the original structure and chord progressions.  I mean you already said that it's unpolished and weird LoL.  I'm sure this would sound much better if performed idiomatically by the instruments you chose.  Bars 54 - 56 are especially in need of more idiomatic writing and realistic improvisation of real players.  But I definitely enjoyed this nonetheless - thanks for sharing!

  • 3 weeks later...
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On 6/21/2024 at 7:19 PM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hello @Cappielly!

Nice song!  Very folksy and country-like!  I like the sarcasm of the lyrics - I can imagine some bitter old man singing this and playing his fiddle.  Formally, this doesn't really have a chorus - just instrumental interludes that cling to the original structure and chord progressions.  I mean you already said that it's unpolished and weird LoL.  I'm sure this would sound much better if performed idiomatically by the instruments you chose.  Bars 54 - 56 are especially in need of more idiomatic writing and realistic improvisation of real players.  But I definitely enjoyed this nonetheless - thanks for sharing!

 

Thank you!

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